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Lonely
Nov 11, 2006 5:39:25 GMT -5
Post by Marnie Cromwell on Nov 11, 2006 5:39:25 GMT -5
I was feeling lonely and depressed, so I decided to write this song to show everyone what I feel almost everyday. I know it's not the best, it's one of the small accomplishments I've made in my life:
I sit around and hear them talk Eventually I get up and walk 'cuz no one cares Even when I talk real loud Then I start to scream and shout please someone listen
'cuz I'm lonely I am lonely No one to hold me I am lonely, I am lonely
I walk on by feel invisible Wishing that somebody would notice I'm lonely I am lonely Sitting by the telephone Hoping that somebody will call Wish someone knew That I exist in this cruel cruel world This loneliness, I want to hurl Still no one cares
'cuz i'm lonely I am lonely No one to hold me I am lonely
(bridge) Then eventually you aknowledge me but it's only to do you a favor treating me like a slave, I can't believe I am a good person, why?
'cuz i'm lonely I am lonely No one to hold me I am lonely I am lonely I am lonely No one to hold hold me I am lonely I am lonely
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Lonely
Nov 11, 2006 15:53:30 GMT -5
Post by Troy Samuels on Nov 11, 2006 15:53:30 GMT -5
wow its good
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Lonely
Nov 11, 2006 16:42:06 GMT -5
Post by Lacey-Lee Evin on Nov 11, 2006 16:42:06 GMT -5
Wow...that's great. A helluva lot better than songs I've tried to write in the past. Sometimes I find it nearly impossible to write my feelings down on paper..then I just kinda write it in a..."story in a poem form" kind of way..or however Morphy says it.
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Lonely
Nov 12, 2006 6:04:42 GMT -5
Post by Marnie Cromwell on Nov 12, 2006 6:04:42 GMT -5
Really? I thought it sucked
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